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| Quick mock-up I did last night of my poster idea |
Current design boards:
Mega crit feedback:
I found the mega crit really useful to gain some feedback on my current application proposals before I invested time into them, I also thought it was useful to see how other people had been working.
It was really interesting to consider how everyone had exactly the same starting point, and to see how wildly they have developed into personal projects
Pitch:
In my pitch, I talked about the key points of my project, which are:
- That the product is strongly linked to a charity, working alongside a camouflage cream producer
- That whilst I was drawing the skin conditions, I was reminded of flower shapes, and that vitiligo is often segmental, meaning it is mirrored across the body like butterfly wings
- That the shapes are all taken from skin conditions, flower shapes and butterfly wing patterns
- I also talked about how I was applying small amounts of text to the lid
I found the pitch immensely useful in myself clarifying my project and how I will tie it up in the coming days
Feedback:
- The poster received good feedback, with my intent being very evident, to show the use of Changing Faces, whilst offering non judgemental facts
- There was a lot of support for how my project isn't 'cheapened' by becoming packaging because of the strong links with the charity
- It was also suggested that I could expand my range further and propose selling prints to raise funds for the charity
- A lot of people said the prints reminded them of biology/skin, which I was really happy with
- In order to make my text fit onto the product better, Bronte suggested that I try to include a light transparency box underneath the text
- The grain of the print was praised, as the faded nature reminded a few people of how it is simple and not glaringly obvious, which can often be the case with skin conditions
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