POSITIVES:
- I like the suggestion between balance and unease, which reminds me of the elements of space and Saturns rings
- The slightly rough, uneven quality adds interest to the piece and ensures it's unique and not just a generic album cover
- The weighting of the black and yellow works well to show a dominating space on a less strong colour and give the composition balance
NEGATIVES:
- I could have tried to include more of the shadows in the scan to show its handmade quality
- I could also have misaligned the circles slightly to make it even more tipsy and unique
- The background colour seems slightly too harsh, especially alongside the yellow, which has to fight for placement on the page
WHAT HAVE I LEARNT:
- To trust my instincts and create more physical work if that's what I feel I need- To experiment broadly before narrowing down to a final
- To spend time exploring where a project could take me and not stress about not getting it right first time
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