I really wanted to create a very traditional outcome for my hand rendered gif, so I drew out 20 frames by hand through the light box. Although I like how this effect comes across, I think it might be a bit too varying and 'jumpy', especially the scarf, as I think the block colour moves around too much and demands the most attention on the screen, which was not what I intended.
What I like:
- Movement of paws-think this is really sweet and effective, would have been better more central though
- Movement of eyes adds an extra element of interest
- Like slight movement in ears, adds a natural element to the image
What I don't like:
- Bottom half is too 'jumpy' and distracts from the rest
- Fur moves too much, could have tried to make them more standardised
- Could have tried to show scarf growing, then being pulled back to show progression
What I would do differently:
- Consider composition more thoroughly
- Think about adding media differently
- Trace bottom half more carefully
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