Today I was able to get some feedback on the roughs I had been developing and discuss any concerns or thoughts I had. I found this very helpful, since we have had a week of independent study, so reflecting on my work with others inputting their opinions has meant I have been able to form a good plan of how my week ahead will be structured.
What is working?
- Maine oyster idea seems most 'resolved'
- Subtlety of elk and raccoon make the landscape almost secondary- is this what I want?
- Colours within each one go well together and aren't too contrasting
What needs working on this week?
- Think about cropping- just eyes and antlers? Just paws of kangaroo?
- All need to be cohesive- don't have some cropped and some not- also having only one shellfish doesn't quite fit
- GET WORKING ON ILLUSTRATOR- need to see how they will translate to a digital platform
- Think on the theme slightly- the one which fits the best is the Maine one because that is where most oysters come from- could look at more exports or even just more shellfish ports?
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