Greetings From- Feedback

We had a big peer feedback session today, which was structured so that we gained feedback on a lot of different aspects of our work.

This is what people thought-

Idea:
- Ranging from cities to have a beach to the main imports/exports of that city

Communication:
- Cities within shell represent location and contrast shows difference between nature and man made

Image:
- Nice line quality and colour next to negative space works well, despite colour, feel muted

Speculative:
- Is background colour too similar to the shell colour?
- Texture on the shells would have been nice
- Could the cities be more integrated with the shells?
- Could more detail be added to the background?

Additions:
- I like the idea, great concept?
- Colours!! (Are nice, good consistency) Uncomplicated and really well done
- The way you've used texture and a simple but v effective colour palette
- Simple and effective idea, work as a set
- Beautiful use of pastel shades
- Shell shapes are good
- Faint drips are simple but make image more interesting
- Love the bold colours


What do I think?
- I agree that I could have pushed the images a bit further through trying to incorporate the shells into the background more
- Could have tried to make the cities join more seamlessly to the shells
- Overall I am happy with the outcome, but feel if I had invested more time near the m=beginning I would have a more 'conclusive' outcome